My OTH fic

[kayleen]

This is my very first full length story ever. I hope you all enjoy it!
Here's the first part:

"You're going down Bucky!" Spike said. "No way!" Bucky yelled back to his brother. "I play Winner!" Quillo said to both of her brothers. Bucky and Spike were playing the game they took from some human boys when they were taking their food. It was a car racing game, their favorite kind."Yay! High score!" Bucky yelled happily. Then, out of the corner of his eye, Bucky thought he saw something white shining in the sunlight. He looked up at a hill just a couple feet above where he and his brother and sister were playing.
Sure enough, standing on the hill, was a white animal. Bucky couldn't quite make out what it was. It had a cat-like body with pure white fur, black paws, a raccoon mask and tail, blue eyes, and small black-tipped ears. Just as quickly as Bucky saw it, the creature
dissappeared. "Hah! I win Bucky!" Spike yelled happily. "What?" Bucky looked up at the game. It blinked PLAYER 2 WINS in bold red letters. "Yay! My turn!" Quillo said, taking the game from Bucky's paws. Bucky didn't care that he lost, he just wanted to know what
that creature was. Bucky got up and walked over to his mother, Penny. "Hey mom? Are we and the rest of our family the only animals in this part of the forest?" Penny looked down at her youngest son. "Well jeepers," Penny said,"why do you ask that son?" "Well," Bucky
said,"I thought I saw a white animal just now, on that hill." Bucky pointed to the hill where he saw the animal. His mother chuckled. "Oh Bucky, you probably just imagined it. You did have a lot of cookies." Bucky sighed and slowly walked away. "But I wasn't imagining it..."
he said under his breath, " I really saw it."

The white creature Bucky saw walked down from the hill. She thought about what she just saw. A family of different animals, stealing things from the humans. She growled at the thought of humans. She used to be a beautiful raccoon, whom everyone respected and loved. But that all changed when the humans came and caught her. They took her to a laboratory, where they did tests on her. One of these tests changed her life forever. The humans combined her DNA with that of a lion. Her body morphed from a slender raccoon body, to the muscular body of a lion. However, she still had her mask, tail, black paws, blue eyes, height and intelligence. The scientists who performed the experiment were thrilled with their success, but she was outraged. How dare they turn her into a lion/raccoon hybrid? She leaped for an open window and escaped. But this just gave her more problems. When animals looked at her, they screamed and ran away. To them, she was a monster, not a raccoon desperate for help. "Did you find them Kayleen?" a ruff, low voice said. Kayleen looked up and saw a black bear standing in front of her. "Yes Vincent, I did." Kayleen said. Vincent was the only animal in the forest who didn't fear her. He made a deal with Kayleen that he would be her "friend", as long as she didn't anger him and gave him what he wanted. "And was RJ with them?" Vincent snarled. "I don't know." Kayleen said. "All I saw were a couple of porcupines, a skunk and a turtle." Vincent growled. Ever since RJ broke his promise to him, Vincent has been hungry for nothing but revenge. "He's with them," Vincent said," Those fools let him join their family, and RJ's too dumb to say no to something like that." "I dont think a family sounds so bad myself..." Kayleen muttered under her breath. "What did you say?!" Vincent roared. "Nothing!" Kayleen said, afraid to upset Vincent even more. "Kayleen," Vincent said, glaring at her," don't be stupid and make the same mistake RJ did. Because if you do, I will hunt you down and kill you. Now you are going to help me find RJ, so I can finally have my revenge!"

[RJfangirl]

Wow this story is great. I can tell it was the same one from your DA account. Good job Kayleen.

Oh before I get forget, I added you on my watch list at DA and put some of your drawings in my fave list. Keep up the good work my new friend.

[rjandheather]

It's one of the best OTH fics I've seen.

[kayleen]

Part: 2

RJ tossed and turned in his sleep that night. He dreamt that Vincent was chasing him through the forest. RJ tripped on a rock and fell onto the cold ground. He tried to get up, but Vincent grabbed him by the tail and dangled him over his head. "You're dead RJ!" Vincent roared. "And your friends are next!" Vincent opened his mouth and dropped RJ into his mouth. RJ woke up before Vincent's teeth could crush his body. He rubbed his head. "I've been having that dream for a while." he groaned. The raccoon sat up and yawned. "And it's keeping me from getting any sleep." RJ knew his problems with Vincent were over, but he was still worried about the thought of him coming back. A while ago, RJ tried to steal the food Vincent had in a red wagon during hibernation. He almost got out of the cave, when he decided to open a container of Spuddies, which woke Vincent up. RJ told Vincent that the food wasn't stolen, since it was still in the cave. But then RJ backed up and hit the wagon full of food, and it rolled out of the cave and got hit by a truck. Vincent then gave him a week to get it all back, wagon and all. That's when RJ met Verne, Hammy, Stella, Heather, Ozzie, Penny, Lou and the kids. He persuaded them to help him get the food by telling them they were collecting it for their next hibernation. Verne, the leader, didn't like the idea of stealing from the humans. He tried return the food the day before RJ had to give it to Vincent, but it all got destroyed. But that night, RJ planned for all the animals to sneak into a human named Gladys' house. She was the president of the Homeowner's Association, and was hosting a party and had boxes full of food. They got the food, but Verne and his "family" were caught by Dwayne, the person Gladys had hired to kill the animals. RJ escaped, and gave the food to Vincent. But then RJ felt guilty and rescued his friends from Dwayne, but destroyed Vincent's food in the process. Vincent then tried to kill RJ and the others. But Vincent, Dwayne and Gladys were arrested, and Vincent was sent to the Rocky Mountains. Verne and the gang forgave RJ and let him join their family. RJ thought for sure his problems were over after that, but now nightmares of Vincent getting his blood-thirsty revenge haunted him at night. "Ok RJ, just relax." RJ said to himself,"Vincent is gone now, so stop acting stupid. You'r troubles are over!" RJ finally relaxed and layed back down, but he didn't go back to sleep just yet. Instead, he stared up at the sky. The moon was full, which made RJ shudder. The moon made him remember when he had to give Vincent the food again. The moon was going to be full at the end of that week, and RJ had until then to give Vincent the food. RJ slapped himself on the cheek. "Stop thinking about it! Vincent is gone!" he yelled to himself again. When RJ finally calmed down again, he closed his eyes and went to sleep.

Kayleen was laying on a tree branch right above where RJ was sleeping. She gazed down at the raccoon, who was tossing and turing again. "Poor little guy." Kayleen said to herself,"He's still so afraid of Vincent." She couldn't help but smile. "I can't let Vincent hurt him." The moment she said that however, Kayleen regreted it. "Are you nuts?!" She thought. "Vincent would, literally, kill you if he heard you say that!" Her thoughts were interupted by a yell coming from below. Kayleen looked down again and saw RJ, wide awake with fear in his eyes. RJ groaned then tried to get back to sleep again. Now Kayleen really felt bad for him. RJ wasn't just afriad of Vincent, he was terrified by the very thought of him! "Well, it seems RJ still hasn't forgotten my threats, has he?" Kayleen looked behind her and saw Vincent right underneath her. She jumped off the branch and sat next to him. "He still has nightmares about you trying to kill him, even though all that happened months ago." Vincent smirked.

"Which makes this whole thing even better."

"What's the plan Vincent?"

"I will attack the porcupine kids, and you will rescue them. Then, you will let them take you home with them, then ask the turtle to let you join their family so you can protect them from further harm. If all goes well, they will let you become one of them. After that, you will get RJ to trust you. Then you tell him to take a walk with you, and you lead him to me. And then I will finally have my revenge on that pathetic little raccoon." Vincent looked down at Kayleen. "And if you dare try to save his life, I will kill you as well." Kayleen sighed and looked back at RJ. "Understood."

[latte]

Wow! This is really good! I want more! And soonsoon!

[RJfangirl]

Wow, amazing. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up!

[kayleen]

Part: 3


"Hey Bucky! Let go play tag!" Spike yelled over his shoulder. "I'm comming!" Bucky yelled back, running to his brother and sister. "1...2...3...NOT IT!" Quillo said. "NOT IT!" Spike said. "Hey!
Wait a minute!" Bucky said. "I didn't know we were gonna do it like-" "BUCKY'S IT!" Spike and Quillo said in union as they ran off into the forest. Bucky sighed and ran after his brother and sister. Vincent and Kayleen were hiding not too far off from where the kids were playing. Vincent smiled an evil smile. "The plan is in motion." he said. He glared at Kayleen. "Go!" Without missing a beat, Kayleen jumped from their hiding place and followed the kids quietly and secretivly. Vincent ran far ahead and chose another hiding place, waiting for the porcupines to get close enough for him to strike. "Got ya, Spike!" Bucky said happily. Spike whirled around and tried to tag Bucky again. Bucky dodged him and ran ahead as fast he could, passing Quillo. Kayleen chuckled at all this. "These kids are soo cute!" she thought. Bucky kept running faster and faster. It took him a while to realize that he left his brother and sister far behind him. "Whoops. Looks like I went a little too fast." Bucky said, almost laughing. He then realized that he was really tired as well. Bucky went over to a log and sat down. "Man," Bucky said, clentching his stomach,"I knew I shouldn't have had all those chips..." Something then started rustling in the bushes behind where Bucky was sitting. He jumped up and looked at the bushes. Something growled behind them. Bucky started to shake. "RUN!" his mind kept saying, but his body was frozen with fear and wouldn't respond. Before anything else could happen, a black bear came out of the bushes roaring and started lashing at him.

Bucky finally snapped out of it and ran faster then he did when he and his brother and sister were playing tag. But it didnt matter how fast he ran, the bear tripped him with one of his huge paws. Bucky tumbled over three times and landed on his stomach dazed. The bear slowly walked up to him and lifted his paw for the final blow. Bucky braced himself to feel the bear's paw come crashing down on him, but instead he heard a painful roar. Bucky looked over his shoulder and saw the same white animal that he saw the other day lashing and biting at the bear's neck. The bear roared and tried to rip off the white animal, but it just bit down harder. After what seemed like an eternity, the bear finally got the animal off and ran away. The white animal turned around and looked at Bucky. "Are you ok?" it asked him. Wha-who are you?" Bucky asked, amazed from what he just saw. "My name is Kayleen, and I'm a lion/raccoon hybrid." "Hybrid? What's that?" Bucky asked puzzled. "It's a combination of two different animals." Kayleen said.

"Bucky!"

"Buckster!"

Bucky turned around and saw his brother and sister running up to where he and Kayleen were. "Are you ok?" Spike asked. "We heard a something that sounded like a fight, and we remembered you ran this way, so we came as fast we could." "It's ok" Bucky said. "Kayleen saved me." He gestured to the hybrid. "Hey! I have an idea!" Spike said.

"Lets bring her-"

"Lets bring her home with us!" Quillo said.

Spike glared at his sister. "I was gonna say that!" he said. "Well, I beat you to it!" Quillo said. Bucky laughed a little, then looked up at Kayleen. "Come on, lets go. I want to introduce you to our family."

[buts]

WOW!That's exiting!
Man,this is a great story.

[latte]

*clapclap*Yaaay!

[kayleen]

Part: 4

It had been a few days since Kayleen saved Bucky from Vincent. The kids introduced her to their family. Everyone loved her from that moment on. She told them about her past, but nothing about Vincent of course. Heather was happy because now there was another girl that was close to her age in the family. RJ was glad that now there was another "raccoon" to help him make plans to get food from the humans. And Hammy was happy to make a new friend. Kayleen grew so attatched to them all. She was starting to think maybe she should just forget Vincent and live with these guys for the rest of her life. But Vincent's threats lingered in her head. If she tried to save them from being killed, Vincent would kill her too. Kayleen and RJ just finished making a plan. "Now, someone has to stay behind." RJ said. "I'll do it." Kayleen replied. RJ looked at her, ears drooped. "Are you sure?" he said.

"This would be your first heist."

"It's ok, I don't mind."

"Oh well, you can catch the next one."

And with that, RJ and the rest of the animals went to get the food. Kayleen walked over to the log and layed down. "Kayleen!" Kayleen jumped, then looked around. "Over here!" a voice said again. Kayleen followed the voice to some bushes. "Vincent?" she said. "Is that you?" "Yes, I want you to meet me later tonight, and tell me what's been happening." With that, the bear left.


Kayleen darted through the forest. The moonlight shone brightly on her white pelt. She stopped and sniffed around. Her ears moved all around, trying to hear something. A rustling in the bushes caught her attention and she turned towards it. Vincent came out from behind, rubbing his neck. "You know, Kayleen." Vincent grumbled. "You didn't have to bite me that hard in our little act. My neck still hurts." Kayleen chuckled. "Just wanted to make it look real." she said. Vincent grunted. "Part one of your plan was sucessfull." Kayleen said. "Yes." Vincent agreed. Then he smirked at Kayleen. "And it seems that RJ already seems to like you." "What!? Are you spying on me!??" Kayleen growled. "Not spying." Vincent said. "Just checking." Kayleen growled. She didn't like the fact that Vincent was spying on her. It was like he didn't trust her. But then she thought about it, and noticed that she wasn't exactly being 100 % loyal. "Now Kayleen," Vincent said seriously. "Part two of the plan is for you to make RJ trust you, which shouldn't be too hard" Vincent chuckled. Kayleen growled. "What does this stupid bear mean?" she thought. "What does he mean by that? It shouldn't be too hard? What's that about?? Does he know something I don't?" "Kayleen! Are you paying attention??" Vincent growled. Kayleen snapped out of her thoughts. "Y-yes Vincent, I am." she said. "Good." Vincent said, sneering. "Now, get moving!!!" Kayleen darted back to the log. "And don't forget!" Vincent roared. "If you fail or try to save RJ's life, I'll kill you!" Kayleen cringed at those words. She wanted to help RJ and his friends, not help kill them. But she knew she couldn't, for her own sake. Kayleen arrived at the log tired and stressed. She crawled inside and settled down next to RJ. She glanced at the little raccoon sleeping next to her. A feeling of comfort washed over her as she looked at him. She smiled, pressed her body against his, and fell into a deep sleep. RJ opened his eyes to see Kayleen's beautiful white fur against him. He smiled and draped one arm around her, holding her close. Then he went back to sleep smiling.

[latte]

1...2...3...awwww. That last moment was so cute.

[kayleen]

Ok, I know the begining is kinda messed up, but I had no idea how to start it...

Part: 5

"Come on!! We can't find a blasted thing out here!"

"I told you to shut up, Jake!! There's got to be a deer or something out here somewhere."

"Hm, where have I heard that before? Oh yeah!! That's what you've been saying for the past 3 hours straight!! Look, ever since they turned this place into a frickin' neighborhood and cut out all but a small section of this blasted forest, there has been no game here."

"Maybe you're right, for once. Come on, Jake. Let's get out of this place."

"Hold on, let me throw out this cigar first."

Jake took the cigar out of his mouth and tossed it on the forest floor. "There." he said. The two hunters then gathered their guns and left, leaving Jake's cigar still burning on the forest floor. Small embers began to flare from the cigar and gather on the ground, starting a small fire.The fire began to grow, attaching to leaves, bushes and trees, all the while gaining strength. It then began to spread quickly, destroying everything in it's path, as it got closer, and closer, to the log where Kayleen, RJ and the others lived.

"Hey Kayleen! Spike, Quillo and I are going to play. Wanna come?" Bucky asked. "No, it's ok, I'm gonna stay here and rest. Didn't get enough sleep last night." Kayleen said, yawning. "Alright. Be back soon!" Bucky ran into the woods with his brother and sister. Kayleen laid her head on her paws and closed her eyes. "And where did you go off to last night?" Kayleen opened her eyes and saw RJ sit next to here. "Just out for a walk." She said. Then she smiled mischieviously. "And why did you have your arm around me when I woke up?" RJ's face turned bright red. "Well...um...Kayleen." RJ said nervously. "I think I...Um...You." He picked up a flower and gave it to her. "Here." Kayleen knew exactly what RJ was trying to tell her. She smiled and kissed his cheek. RJ gave her a shy smile. Suddenly, Kayleen started sniffing the air. "What's wrong?" RJ asked. "Do you smell that?" Kayleen asked. RJ sniffed too. "Yeah." he said. "It smells like..." "HELP!!" Kayleen and RJ turned around and saw Spike and Quillo running towards them and everyone else. "What happened??" Heather asked the terrified kids. "Where's Bucky!?" Penny asked, noticing that her youngest son wasn't with them. "There's a fire headed our way!" Quillo cried. "Bucky's trapped in the flames!!" Spike yelled. "Where is he trapped?" Kayleen asked them. "Not too far from here." Quillo replied. Kayleen paused for a moment, then turned to Verne. "Verne, get everyone as far away from here as you can!" "What about you?" Hammy asked her. "I'm going to help Bucky." Kayleen replied. "But you can't!" RJ said.

"You'll get killed!!"

"That doesn't matter now!"

"It does to me!" RJ cried, his eyes beginning to fill with tears. "I'm not going to..." Kayleen silenced him with a kiss. "I love you." she whispered, then darted into the forest. Verne turned to everyone else. "You heard her! he said. "Lets go!" Verne started leading everyone away from their home. He turned and saw RJ still standing there, staring at the direction where Kayleen ran off to find Bucky. "RJ! Come on!" RJ sighed and started following the others. He looked back one more time. "Be careful." he said under his breath. "My angel of the forest"

[RJfangirl]

OMG, this is so....amazing!! Go Kayleen! *Cheers*

[latte]

ohmygawd, more! NOW!

[kayleen]

Part: 6

Kayleen ran through the burning forest, searching for the impossible. She yelled Bucky's name repeatedly, moving her ears desperately trying to hear a reply. The smoke burned her eyes and almost choked her. She was about turn around and go back to the others, when she heard a faint cry. "Help!" the voice said. Kayleen recognized it immediately. "Bucky!" She yelled. "Bucky, where are you!?" "Over here!" Bucky yelled not too far away. Kayleen found him trapped under a log, surrounded by flames. "Hold on, Bucky!" Kayleen said, trying to find a way to reach him. She looked all around, but couldn't find anyway to save him. She decided there was no other way, but to jump through the flames and get him. "Hurry!" Bucky cried. Kayleen gulped, and lunged into the flames. She felt the heat go past her fur and felt her feet land safely on the ground. "You made it!" Bucky said happily. "We don't have time to discuss things!" Kayleen yelled. "Just get on my back, so we can get out of here!" Bucky jumped on her back and she leaped through the flames and started running back to the others. The whole forest was in a blaze now. Branches, even trees were falling all over the place. "Where almost there!" Kayleen said. "Just hang on!" Bucky held onto her fur tightly. Kayleen stopped suddenly. Her ears moved back and forth, and her eyes were wide with fear. "Bucky," Kayleen said, "go to the others, now." "But why?" Bucky asked. "What's going...?" A roar sounded through the burning forest, and a large black bear jumped in front of them. "Vincent!" Kayleen cried, completely horrified. She looked over her shoulder and looked at Bucky's terrified face. "Bucky, go and find the others, I'll take care of Vincent."

"You can't fight him! He'll kill you!"

"Go now, Bucky!"

"But..."

Kayleen roared at the little porcupine, who jumped off her back and ran away. Vincent tried to run after him, but Kayleen cut him off. "I won't let you hurt him! She said. "Or RJ!" Vincent began to growl. "Your last mistake!" he roared in anger and tried to hit her with his massive paw. Kayleen jumped out of the way, then leaped onto his back and bit down on his neck. Vincent Grabbed her and threw her off. She slammed, head first, into a boulder, knocking her unconscious.

RJ and the other animals were running as fast as they could through the suburbs, trying to get as far away from the forest as possible. He kept looking back, hoping to see Kayleen and Bucky coming towards them. Oh, Kayleen, RJ thought, Where are you?

"RJ!"

RJ looked toward the direction where the voice came from and saw Bucky running up to him. "Bucky!!" Penny said happily and went to hug her son. Bucky hugged his mother then went to RJ completely out of breath. "Where's Kayleen??" RJ asked worriedly. "Vincent attacked us!" Bucky panted. “She told me to run and find you guys." RJ felt like he was going to have a heart attack. He looked back at what was left of their forest, and began running back. Verne and the others followed after him. RJ ran as fast as he possibly could. The forest was grey with ash and smoke. Some of the smoke was getting into his eyes, burning them. But he didn't care, all that mattered to him was finding Kayleen. RJ saw something on the ground lying motionless ahead of him, and first he didn't know what it was. But as he got closer and closer, it became more visible. RJ couldn't believe his eyes. In front of him was a small cat-like animal, with white fur, a raccoon mask and tail, black paws, and small black-tipped ears.

It was Kayleen.