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Post by latte on Dec 14, 2006 20:45:14 GMT -5
O-o You really love cliffies, don't you?
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Post by RJfangirl on Dec 14, 2006 23:21:12 GMT -5
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Post by kayleen on Dec 15, 2006 15:12:21 GMT -5
Part: 7 RJ knelt down beside her. His heart felt like it was just ripped to shreds. He held her close to him. "I love you." he whispered. Tears ran down his cheeks and onto her soft white fur. Anger began to build inside him. RJ gazed up angrily at the night sky. "VINCENT!!" he yelled. "It's me you want, so come and get me!" Verne ran over to his friend. "RJ, stop!" "Why should I??" RJ said. "This is all my fault!" "RJ, that's not..." "If only I kept my promise to give to Vincent all his food. If only I didn't try to steal it in the first place. None of this would have happened if it weren't for me!" "But then you wouldn't have met her, RJ." RJ paused and looked back at Kayleen. Tears swelled up in his eyes once more. RJ buried his head into her soft fur. Penny and Lou held each other and cried, as did Stella and Tiger. Everyone cried over the loss of their friend. RJ got up and walked past everyone. "Lets go." Everyone walked away with their heartbroken companion. Bucky looked back to Kayleen one more time, and thought he saw her move! "RJ! Come back! I think she's still alive!" RJ looked back at the little porcupine, then at Kayleen, and thought he saw her tail twitch! He ran back over to her. "Kayleen?" he said quietly. Kayleen slowly opened her eyes and gazed up at RJ. She smiled weakly. "Hello...RJ." RJ was lost for words. He hugged her tightly. "I love you, Kayleen." RJ said. "I love you too, RJ." Suddenly, the bushes in front of them began to rustle, and a deep growl came from behind them. RJ and Kayleen's eyes widened with fear, as Vincent came out from behind the bushes. "I thought I killed you, Kayleen!" Vincent said angrily. "It'll take more than a simple bump on the head to kill me!" Kayleen growled. Vincent growled and was about to attack her, but had a better idea. Why kill her, when he could ruin her life forever? He looked at RJ. “Tell me, RJ, “ Vincent chuckled and lifted Kayleen’s chin so they were looking eye to eye. “Isn’t Kayleen, just a wonderful actress?” “What,” RJ asked full of confusion, “What are you talking about??” Vincent chuckled again and an evil smirk came to his face. “Kayleen has been helping me, so I can get my revenge on you.” RJ’s heart felt like it skipped a beat. He couldn’t believe what he just heard. “RJ, please!!” Kayleen cried and tried to hug RJ, but he pushed her away. “I thought you loved me.” he muttered sadly. Tears came to Kayleen’s eyes. “I do.” she whispered. “I do.” Vincent laughed in triumph. “It’s time to get revenge, and kill you both!” He and lunged at RJ and Kayleen. Kayleen leaped at Vincent's face and clawed at his eyes, blinding him for a few minutes. "RJ!" Kayleen said. "Get everyone out of here!" RJ hesitated. He knew Kayleen was going to try to fight Vincent again, but would she live this time? "Go!" Kayleen roared. RJ turned and ran back to where the others were. "Come on!" he yelled, running past them. The others followed without question. Vincent wiped the blood away from his eyes and glared at Kayleen. "It doesn't matter how far they go." he growled. "I'll still find them." "You'll have to kill me first!" Kayleen said, running in the opposite direction that RJ and the others took. Vincent ran after her, more determined then ever to get rid the hybrid once and for all. Kayleen ran faster and faster, trying to get Vincent far away RJ and the others, and also making sure he didn't catch and kill her. She looked over her shoulder and saw the blood lust in Vincent's eyes. Vincent's mouth then curved into an evil smile. Kayleen looked back in front of her and saw a large, rocky cliff ahead of her. She was trapped! She stopped at the foot of the cliff, and looked up. It was slanted just enough for her to climb it. She leaped up onto a boulder and began to climb, with Vincent right behind her. RJ and the others ran through the destroyed forest. They could hear Vincent's angry roars no matter which way they went. RJ stopped and looked back. He had this feeling that Kayleen was in trouble. Verne stopped beside him. "Come on, RJ!" he said. "Kayleen told us to get out of here." "Verne," RJ said, "I'm going back to help Kayleen, and I want you to get everyone out of here." Without another word, RJ ran back in the direction he and the others came. He could hear Vincent's roars getting closer and closer. RJ came to this large, rocky cliff, where he saw Kayleen climbing with Vincent right behind her. RJ's heart began to race. He had to help her! RJ looked all around and found a small trail that led to the top of the cliff. He looked at Kayleen one last time, then ran as fast he could up the trail. Kayleen was almost at the top. She looked back and saw that Vincent was struggling. His weight was causing some of the boulders under him to collapse. Kayleen tried to climb a little faster, but she was too tired. Her muscles screamed at her, telling her stop, but her mind told her keep going. "Kayleen!" a voice said. Kayleen looked up and saw RJ right above her. He reached out and grabbed her paw. RJ pulled her up and held her close to him. Vincent was more angry now then he ever was in his life. He climbed faster and faster up the cliff, determined to kill both animals that made his life hell. Kayleen raked her mind to try and find a way to stop Vincent. She remembered how the boulders under his feet collapsed when he stepped on them. She looked down and saw that these boulders were much more sturdy, so they could hold him up. Kayleen looked closely and saw each time he stepped on a boulder, it cracked. He needed to be just a little bit heavier for it to break. She jumped high in the air, and came crashing down on Vincent's head, pushing him downward. The boulder under him broke, and he lost his balance. Kayleen jumped off Vincent and landed on a nearby rock, and watched him fall to his death. She climbed back up and she and RJ both stared at Vincent's lifeless body far below them. A few years had past since Vincent's death. The animals found a new home in a different forest. RJ and Kayleen had started a family of their own. They had three kids, Tosca, Will and Jack. Tosca looked just like Kayleen, except she had cream colored fur. Will and Jack looked like RJ, but Will had tan fur. RJ and Kayleen sat next to each other and watched their children play. "RJ? Can you promise me something?" Kayleen asked. RJ gave her a puzzled look. "What?" Kayleen gazed deeply in RJ's eyes. "Promise me, that you'll never leave me. That we'll always be together." RJ smiled. "I'll never leave you, Kayleen." he said. "Just as long as you'll always love me." Kayleen pinned him down playfully and kissed him. "Always." END (P.S. Yes, I know I really exaggerated how big the forest was, but hey, it had to be done for this to work out. Please keep in mind the fact that I wrote this when I hated Vincent (Which is why he died, which I really regret now... ![:'(](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/cry.png) ). I just started liking him a few months ago. Oh well, it can't be helped... Inspiration for the whole cliff bit - Bambi 2 Insperation for the whole Vincent and Kayleen thing - Hercules (Hades and Meg) I hope you guys liked it!)
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Post by RJfangirl on Dec 15, 2006 19:13:37 GMT -5
I knew this fanfic would end short, but hey good job Kayleen. I'm proud of you. This was the greatest fanfic I've ever read. You did a wonderful job on it. I gotta say you're an awesome writer. ![:)](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/smiley.png)
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Post by latte on Dec 15, 2006 19:27:31 GMT -5
*applauds*You rock! Great story.
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Post by kayleen on Dec 15, 2006 19:53:02 GMT -5
Heh, thanks guys. ;D wait, what do you mean it ended short?
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Post by RJfangirl on Dec 15, 2006 20:02:19 GMT -5
Well wasn't that the ending? I've read longer stories than this, but for 7 pages, that's a short story. Still good. I really like it.
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Post by kayleen on Dec 15, 2006 20:05:36 GMT -5
Oh, ok. Yes, that was the end. I just didn't know what you meant for a sec, that's all ![;)](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/wink.png)
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Post by RJfangirl on Dec 15, 2006 20:09:02 GMT -5
That's okay. Sometimes I don't know what I'm talking about either. I really love this story, your RJ/Kayleen pairing is cute.
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Post by kayleen on Dec 15, 2006 20:15:46 GMT -5
Well, like I already stated, at first they weren't even supposed to be a couple. I guess it's a good thing I made them one
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Post by RJfangirl on Dec 15, 2006 20:44:39 GMT -5
Yeah I know. I didn't think they were a couple at first, but after reading this fanfic, it looks like they are.
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Post by buts on Dec 16, 2006 7:47:57 GMT -5
Hmm,Just like in over the hedge: -there comes a new person who helps the family. -That person has a secret or something. (RJ need to get food for vincent,Kayleen need to expose RJ)
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Post by kayleen on Dec 16, 2006 8:14:05 GMT -5
Yeah, my Stepmother pointed that out to me when she read it. I guess it means those two are the perfect match XD
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Post by RJfangirl on Dec 17, 2006 22:59:48 GMT -5
Kayleen...where did you get that amazing RJ sig? ![:D](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/grin.png)
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Post by kayleen on Dec 18, 2006 9:15:07 GMT -5
I have my ways... ![:-X](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/lipssealed.png)
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